In this post I want to ask you again to write the narrations of crime stories you have written in class...Choose a member of your group, and s/he will be in charge of posting the story in a comment here...
note: It is possible to send comments without password, so please remember to write your name and the group you are in.;-)
18/11/2011
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Dear Patricia
This history is one more between a men a one woman where the end is not very happy.
Fifty years ago in this city it was a men called Paul. He get married with a woman very rich colled Gigna. She left in a house very big and she had a nice and spencer card.
The problem was that Gina wasn´t pretty woman apart that thes shi was always angry, for this reason they argued every day.
Paul didn´t fall in love but he liked his money, so he thought "I kille her so I have all".
Once while Gina was slepping Paul cut her throat with a knife and she died.
Later Paul said to the police that a burglars entereted in the house through the window and them killed his wife, but a woman police found material evidence (the muder weapon) in the crime scene so she knew that Paul was the killer.
Paul finished into in prision where hi is still.
Te end
PD. have good day tomorrow
Dear Patricia's blogger,
This is a real history in this world. Two person ( a man and a woman) worked very much and they loved in the past. Both bought a big house and he bought a fast car and she didn't like that he didn't say nothing about this question to her.
They became angry and shouted, and he during a few second went crazy and she had been killed. Then a police beutifull woman found a expensive man's pen and he was arrested and he went directily to other litle room of other big law's house. Both houses have bars, one in the garden and other in the door.
Be happy and study English every day and you aren't going to finish in some prision as this person.
Good Sunday's vote.
fhergueta B2 Sanse
Dear Patricia,
This story of a murder is created by Elena and Yolanda, students of 2nd base.
"There was once a rich married. They were The Roberts. He was a important engeneer and she was a bad woman interested in husband's money.
She had a plan to kill him. She hired a killer.
One day, Mr. Roberts was found dead at his home.
When the policewoman arrived at the house, she looked for evidence about the murder. She found the crime weapon. It was a knife.
The policewoman interrogated with wife. The wife said the police that her husband had many enemies.
The policewoman arrested Mr. Roberts's partner. The ambitious widow, inherited the money from Mr. Roberts and enjoyed the luxurious mansion and the expensive car of her husband."
Best Regards teacher.
Elena and Yolanda (2nd.Base)
Dear patricia
In the old house one married that work in the north the London and beginning in a jobs and the house was vacant
One person in his luxing car stopped put on it´s side the door when he saw the door open it´s side,he went into the house and waited the married in the living room.
When the married came back at the house,she looked the door is open and they discuss for this motive,so the person went down and the killed for married and after escape in his luxary car when was arrestid because the police it was pursuit and the police criminal got proof and he was in the prision forever time.
Make for Ruben and Mario.
PD.See you for tuesday.
Carmen – Básico 2
There was once a man very bad called Paul. He lived in a big mansion and he had a very expensive car. He get married with Susan.
Susan was older than her husband, but she was a very rich woman.Paul didn't fall in love, but he wanted his money.
Once Paul found his wife with another man in a bar.He knewn that the man was her lover. So he planed to kill her and her lover.
The day after, while Susan was sleeping, Paul scrape her with a big knife thta he hided into a wardrobe.
In the scene crime a young police woman found the arm.
Paul was setenced twenty years. He died in the prision after three years.
Ann and Eric were married. Eric was a wealthy architec,Ann was a beautiful woman and they living in a big house north of Miami. Often Eric wasn´t at home for work, traveled a lot, Ann was much time alone at home.
One of these trips, Eric returned early, went quietly at home to surprise his wife, but this she wasn´t. Very angry Eric waited to his wife sat in the sofa taking a glass of Wiski.
Ann arrived but didn´t come alone, she was accompanied with mutual friend. Eric very angry and jealous, he rushed with a knife, provoking the death. He tried to scape but the police found his luxurious car in a roadside hotel and arrested him.
Eric was sent to jail where it was until his last days.
See you tomorrow.
By Mª Esther, Elena, Virtudes and Chus- NB2
Mr. and Ms. Smith lived in a big, expensive house in London. Mr. Smith was a businessman and he was always travelling and very busy. His wife was quite a lot angry because he hardly ever stayed at home.
One day she saw husband’s car parked near Piccadilly Circus, but he told her that he was out city. Then Mrs. Smith thought that her husband had a lover. She was too jealous.
This night, when Mr. Smith got back at home his wife was very angry. Also he was drunk and they had a strong discussion. Mr. Smith admitted that he didn’t love her and he was thinking divorced. After that she drove crazy and took a knife. Then they fought and he killed her. Mr. Smith left home.
The next day, a young police woman interrogated him about his wife’s death and found the knife with Mr. Smith’s fingers prints.
Mr. Smith finished in jail for wife’s murderer.
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